Thursday, April 30, 2009

Antigone's Directing

Hm..... where do I begin. First of all, I got to see the Greek Tragedy twice. Which made it quite even more interesting. See, the first time I saw it, it seemed to be a depressing story. Which was what I had learned while studying the script a bit in fundamentals class with Rick Zimmer. So I already knew the back story, the beginning, the middle, and the end. So for me, nothing was a surprise. Also, because I saw it twice, I was able to see the changes, if any, had been made from preview night to performance night. As an actor for over 5 years, I have learned that while acting, ever practice is a time that you develop habits, which are sometimes unbreakable. One of the biggest rules to acting is to act as if you were in the audition of your life. Always act like that, always act, even if it is preview night, as if it is a real performance. Yes, sometimes we have off nights, but that should not always be used as an excuse.
I sat in two different places, one side the first time I saw it, and another side the second time. This way, I was able to access every single point that I had gathered the first time and see if it matched up or not. Eh.... it was mostly the same.
So after studying this script, wow.... I had a completely different image in my head, most definitely. But I tried to keep an open mind, which I did. But the script, really, is just weird and confusing sometimes. And those monologues are just crazy. Haha somebody across from where I was sitting fell asleep. It was kinda funny. The casting was interesting. The woman cast as the Chorus seemed so evil! It was kinda scary throughout the production. It was kinda like she was looking down on the world and watching everyone die and laughing throughout it. I was wondering a bit what it would have been like if the chorus parts had been broken up between two people. Maybe a little bit more interesting and more narrative-like? Possibly....
The guy cast as Haemon was quite good in the dramatic scenes. He seemed more as a dramatic actor. During the romantic scenes, there just seemed to be no chemistry at all. It was really awkward to watch. :[
Ismene was funny, as was the nurse. The people in front of me kept chuckling during her lines because they both were like comedic relief. However, I thought Ismene was supposed to be a dramatic part, so I felt really conflicted watching her on stage. I would have liked to see her be the comedic nurse instead. She would have been better cast as that role.
The king, Creon, was cast for his ability to get angry, most definitely. He seemed more like a protective dad than a king. He was definitely dramatic, so props on that. But he didn't really act as king until the very end, when talking to the guards. His talk with the Chorus was awkward, too because no one else looked at her, like he was having a halucination or something. It was as if she was his conscious, but a person only visible to him. So I'm not really sure why the director did that. It confused me. That happened when the Messenger came in, also. I'm not really sure why the director did that. I got confused and didn't understand the point he was trying to make there. It was awkward because the chorus was narrating throughout the whole play until the end and suddenly she just jumped into the story to become a character. It seemed as if the Messenger should have been somewhat of a narrator, too. As if they were Creon's conscious instead of narrating then suddenly jumped into the story and were people within the story. I had to catch up really fast so I lost what was happening.
As for the guards, there were more like extras you see in a movie. I wish the director would have worked with them more on how to really be guards. He defintely worked the scene with the three guards and Antigone in custody, but the rest of the scenes were a little weird. However, the scene with Antigone and the head guard was quite funny. Comic relief, definitely. Obviously had been worked through.
The girl cast as Antigone obviously did her homework. She was able to transition into levels, which is hard to do as an actor. I've been through that, and it definitely takes skill! The scene with her and Creon was obviously worked over and over. I would have liked to see more of her expressions though. Her blocking was bad, and somewhat pointless. She moved so much that when I looked down to write notes for just a couple seconds then looked back up, she would be on the other side of the stage. It was hard to follow her and understand her expressions and feelings since she was moving around so much.
Because the stage was an arena, all the actors had this problem, but mostly Antigone since she did most of the movement. I would have liked to see a thrust stage instead, that way the actors would have broken character as much, looking around at the audience. I really have no idea what the point of that was. Yes, it may have symbolized Antigone's situation, being trapped, but it really made the play bad. It made it confusing to watch and follow everything since the actors were moving so much and had their backs to the audience, at least one side at all times.
The thing that did catch my eye was the choices for costumes. They were modern yet fit the characters. It was a good choice! I liked how Antigone wore, like her character, a vibrant colored top. It fit her character quite well. Creon's costume was quite good too, but it was more like a suit, but I guess that's what kings wear now-a-days. The voices from off-stage were really strange. They were so muffled that sometimes I got confused at what was happening for a couple seconds until the characters came out on stage. The jokes were really awkward. Only a couple people would understand them, and then laugh awkwardly because no one else was laughing. Or something that was supposed to be dramatic turned out to be funny. It was conflicting. Possibly the director could have helped the actors convey which was funny and which was not through voice control, pauses, and body language.
I really never understood the point the director was trying to make with this play. It was confusing and hard to follow most times. Yes, the actors did do their best. But seeing it twice, it stayed quite static from one performance to the other. The blocking was just weird because of the arena stage. It just didn't fit the script. It made it hard for the audience to follow the emotions and actions of the actors. Well, whatever the point, it wasn't really made at all. In fact, I have absolutely no idea what the point was. Oh well, good effort! I went into the performances with an open mind, I took three and a half pages of notes, obviously :] and I tried to grade the performances and the director justly, which I believe I did do. No matter where you go, there will be problems with a play and also good things, sometimes great things. I just wish the director had had more time to work with the actors really forming their characters instead of memorizing all the monologues. Good job though.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

I agree with you about the blocking of the actors, but with that type of stage, what can you do? The blocking will be awkward for one side of the room if not two or three?? I didn't really know what to expect it being an arena type stage, but throughout the play I had wondered why the director didn't go with a thrust stage as well.

Emily Adele said...

Well you said that you have "studied" this play but from your review it seems otherwise! The chorus cannot be more than one person! Both the chorus and the messenger were figments of Creon's imagination. The round made for great chemisrty with the intensity of the show. Maybe you just haven't developed the art of appreciating unique work when you see it. Hopefully that will come with time.

Anonymous said...

Yeah, I know they have to be one person. Zimmer made that point. It was just very awkward to watch it be played out that way. My point is that as a figment of your imagination, wouldn't they be more of in his head that embodied?

Thanks for your thoughts though.

Topher/Chris said...

In that case, why did we see Louis from "Louie's at 1st and Main" as a person rather than a bird? Also, why shouldn't we be able to see what Creon's talking to, wouldn't that confuse the audience more if the Chorus and Messenger were reduced to mere voice-overs?

Anonymous said...

They can have a presence on stage. but why do they have to be acknowleged?

Emily Adele said...

If they weren't acknowledged then you would have a problem with that. I think you went into this expecting the worse and found every detail you could have a problem with. Just keep in mind that the whole cast is reading these things and it has hurt a lot of people.

Mike Cole (Commander RedBull) said...

This is why we didn't want to critique this play. If we loved it, that would've been phenominal. It would've solved all our problems. But there's the nagging issue of what happens if you didn't love it. What then? Do you fluff it up to make your friends feel better? Do you be honest and tell them what you think? None of us had a vendetta against you guys, we didn't set out to hurt feelings, we just gave our opinions. We're sorry if it hurt cause it wasn't intended to. And from the one we saw in improv to the one we saw with Alisha improvments were made and somethings were better as a whole. It really just puts everyone in an awkward place to have to critique your classmates. This is more Myspace than anything now, but it's needed to be said.

Anonymous said...

I went into this with an open mind. I would have tried out but I was dead tired from the last two terms and I just needed a break since I was already sick. when I went to see the play, I was excited! I was excited to see my own classmates. but I was critiquing the directing, not the actors or anything else.

just like any other play we would see, I critiqued it. I don't have to sugar coat things because I know you. I was an audience member. not part of the cast. that's a huge difference. I sat down, watched the play, critiqued it, and am now in a awful position because I didn't critique it to what you would of wanted me to do. those words are my words, my opinion, and my critique of the play.

there are bad and good things about every play. as an audience member, I didn't like it. that's my opinion and I am titled to it.

AlexAshton said...

see i agree about the blocking. tooooo much movement

Happy-Hour-Girl said...

Deanna I agree with you 100% both times that we saw this show, the changes were very minimal, but you could tell that it had improved the second show. I dont understand still what Zimmers main portrayel in the whole show was.